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📋 题目


🎯 题型分析

项目内容
题型Discuss Both Views(讨论类)
话题犯罪类 - 刑罚目的与监狱功能
关键词prisons, punish, rehabilitate, productive members of society
考察能力分析刑事司法的不同哲学基础

🔍 审题要点


📝 高分范文


📊 结构拆解

【开头段】
├── 背景:deep philosophical questions
├── 让步:recognise legitimate functions of punishment
├── 立场:rehabilitation should be primary goal
└── 理由:better serves individuals and society

【主体段1 - 惩罚派观点】
├── 论点1:retributive justice(intrinsically right)
├── 论点2:deterrent function
├── 论点3:protects public by removing
└── 论点4:closure for victims

【主体段2 - 改造派观点】
├── 核心论点:punishment fails to achieve ultimate goal
├── 现实:most prisoners will be released
├── 方案:education, training, therapy
├── 效果:address underlying causes
└── 经济论证:saves enormous costs

【主体段3 - 综合观点】
├── 立场:incorporate both, rehabilitation as guiding
├── 解释:punishment = framework of accountability
├── 澄清:not soft on crime, but smart approach
└── 证据:Norway, Netherlands lower reoffending rates

【结尾段】
├── 让步:punishment satisfies instinct, serves functions
├── 批评:solely retribution wastes potential
└── 总结:accountable while working toward transformation

✨ 语言亮点

高分词汇

词汇/短语含义用法示例
retributive justice报应正义the principle of retributive justice
intrinsically right本质上正确的punishment is intrinsically right
instrumentally useful工具性有用的not merely instrumentally useful
deterrent function威慑功能serves a deterrent function
recidivism再犯率reducing recidivism saves costs
reintegration重新融入社会preparing inmates for reintegration
law-abiding守法的lead law-abiding lives
incalculable不可估量的incalculable cost of future victims

高分句型


🔄 可迁移表达

原句可迁移到
"retributive justice" vs "rehabilitation"任何惩罚vs改善的讨论
"intrinsically right" vs "instrumentally useful"伦理讨论、目的vs手段
"not a soft approach, but a smart approach"任何需要澄清立场的话题
"break the cycle of X"贫困、暴力、歧视话题
"contribute to rather than harm society"社会角色、公民责任话题

💭 思考延伸


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